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    Tojabei
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    Work Name: Light-em-up Grammar Score: 8 Some minor derps here and there. Pros: Awesome concept awesome characterization hilarious Cons: Some Derps in phrasing double line breaks in some places would've been nice that's all i can think of. This was actually really hard to find cons with (thats why the ones I listed are so weak) Notes: Great job.

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